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2012-12-08 22:25
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Facebook, writing, etc

If any of you use Facebook, you might enjoy becoming a fan of my regularly updated writing page there:

https://www.facebook.com/t.j.a.thurman

If not, as you were.
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2011-05-31 16:01
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Time blew away like dandelion seed

I haven't been around much, recently.

I wanted to mention that I am going to make a print-on-demand book of about a hundred of my formal poems. You can download the PDF for nothing and read it that way if you like. At some point in the near future there will be a printed version of the same thing. I always welcome comment and criticism.
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2011-05-16 17:17
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Facebook and my writing

I've recreated the fan page on Facebook for my writing. If you enjoy my work and you're on Facebook, please like the page. (I need 25 fans to get a plain URL.) I'm probably going to post discount codes and previews on there, so it should be worth your while. Tell your friends, as well.
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2011-04-14 08:15

Wednesday: mostly about teeth



Yesterday I went to mass first thing. Our priest had just come back from seeing his new granddaughter and was full of the news; it was very happy.

Then I went on to the dentist. They took X-rays of my teeth, but I kept gagging on the thing they put in your mouth, so they had to take a picture with the big X-ray machine. For that I had to take some of my piercings out, and some of them healed up in the time it took to put them back in again.

The dentist was very friendly and helpful. He says I have a broken wisdom tooth, and it'll have to come out. That will be next Tuesday, when the dental surgeon comes in. Until then, I have painkillers.

In the time I was waiting for the dentist, I mostly finished the last chapter but four of the current novel. I believe I might be able to get it done entirely today (Thursday) if I put my mind to it.

Later I went shopping for new trousers with Fin, since we're going to Tracy's wedding.

I cooked dinner (it was ravioli and meatballs) and while I cooked I talked to Kit on the phone: it was her birthday. So it was a pretty good day.
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2011-02-05 13:49
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Set of books currently on my desk

some books
For the curious, they are:
  • a Vulgate
  • Bradley's Arnold Latin Prose Composition
  • Brian Jacques, Redwall
  • Milton's shorter poems and sonnets
  • Jonathan Lamb, Tough minds, tender hearts
  • Shusaku Endo, A life of Jesus
  • Thomas Merton, Contemplative prayer
  • Dorothy Sayers, Whose body?
  • Hallowell and Ratey, Delivered from distraction
  • Two copies of Not Ordinarily Borrowable
  • Mary Oliver, The leaf and the cloud
  • Timothy Ratcliffe OP, What is the point of being a Christian?
  • Donald Bisset, Time and again stories
  • Ruth Noel, The languages of Tolkien's Middle-Earth
  • The pocket Thomas Merton.
Most of these are here because I am in the process of reading them.
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2011-01-27 11:48
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Review copies of "Not Ordinarily Borrowable"

I've said this before, but I'll reiterate: anyone is welcome to a copy of Not Ordinarily Borrowable in exchange for posting a review (not necessarily a positive one!). Print publications are awesome, and blog posts are good too. Sending you PDFs is easier to manage, but I can post you a paper copy if needs be.
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2010-04-06 09:01
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Working on a book

If I've seemed rather busy recently, it's because I've been working on a book for Packt. It will be a "cookbook" of ways to solve problems on MeeGo using Python and Qt. It started out as an N900-specific book, but it's grown in the telling.

How to place a phone call
(Of course, until a version of MeeGo with a GUI goes public, I'm testing everything on the N900.) I'm enjoying writing it immensely. It should be out sometime around the autumn.
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2010-03-31 23:14
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"Borrowable"'s ABNA reviews

tl;dr: Borrowable didn't get into the third round because it's middle-grade fiction and this is a YA competition.

ABNA Expert Reviewer

What is the strongest aspect of this excerpt?

Has the tone of a fairy tale and should be enjoyed as such. She is very like Little Red Riding Hood who knows the wolf is waiting for her and is eager to go see if he left any bits of grandma about. Light.

What aspect needs the most work?

The excerpt reads far more like a grade school story than one for young adults. The introduction is almost embarrassingly childish in tone. If the story began with her going into the library and finding out about the dragon, it would be far better. Still - this is for children younger than 10 years old.

What is your overall opinion of this excerpt?

Not at all a YA book, this will appeal to a very young audience of precocious girls of about 7 or 8 years old. Has the ring of a Fairy Tale or Twisted Tale, thought it lacks the spark and wonder of Ella Enchanted. The description of the librarian had me chuckling.

ABNA Expert Reviewer

What is the strongest aspect of this excerpt?

It is nice to see a "scholar" who is the main character of the story, especially when that scholar is a young woman with brains and courage. The story is reminiscent of The Wizard of Oz. It is also interesting to see the melding of the real world with imaginary aspects, such as dragons and ancient people being studied.

What aspect needs the most work?

This story does not seem to be written for young adults, but rather for young children. Especially in the beginning there are a lot of definitions for words that young adults would already know. The prose is very basic and would come across as condescending to an adolescent reader. The pace is also very slow, and is not conducive to a building up of tension and conflict.

What is your overall opinion of this excerpt?

I would characterize this story as more appropriate for a younger audience. The female, young, intelligent scholar, the main protagonist, sets a good example for young girls especially. Young readers would also be interested in the fantastical elements of the story. However, the prose is somewhat dull and slow and there isn't too much that is particularly unique in this excerpt.


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2010-02-26 14:41
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And now, some happy news.



That means the synopsis was one of 2,000 selected (1,000 in each category) as possible winners from about 10,000 entries. Now the editors will read the first couple of chapters and decide whether it should go into the quarterfinal 500, which will be announced on March 23rd.
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2010-02-21 17:13
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Not Ordinarily Borrowable is not ordinarily borrowable

Not Ordinarily Borrowable is not ordinarily borrowable, although they say "not borrowable" instead these days, which makes it very slightly less awesome. But only very slightly.
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2010-01-21 10:12
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The books on the shelf closest to me

  • Androcles and the Lion, Shaw Alphabet Edition (the hardback, not the paperback as in that video)
  • Knuth's Art of Computer Programming
  • Advanced CORBA programming with C++ (not sure what that's doing there)
  • The X Window System, Scheifler & Gettys
  • Elements of New Testament Greek
  • The Sidney Sussex College Annual
  • Thoughtcrime Experiments
  • The Scheme Programming Language
  • Ender's Game
I think I should sort them better.
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2010-01-13 11:42
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"Borrowable" in Shavian

I made this earlier this week; it was pretty simple. I thought I'd post an image in case anyone would like to see what it looks like.



I doubt anyone would want the whole thing, but if you do, it exists.
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2010-01-09 21:42
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I didn't invent the phrase, but...

I didn't invent the phrase, but I don't think Google autocompleted it before I used it as a book title.



If that is because of the book, that's rather wonderful.
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2010-01-07 18:56
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I was challenged to summarise "Borrowable" in verse

One rainy day, Maria looks
To find her college Library Books.
Alas! her hopes were set to fall:
A Fiery Dragon stole them all,
And singed their keeper's beard, as well.
This incident may seem to spell
The ruin of this Ph.D.--
Or else, a switch to chemistry.
But such predictions turn out wrong:
She wasn't timid, all along.
Maria is the kind of maid
Who, even now, is not dismayed:
She cycles off to Oxenford,
For armour, courage, and a sword,
A recipe, a faithful friend,
And finds her thesis has an end.
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2009-12-19 02:08
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The Secret Garden

So I'm currently reading The Secret Garden to Rio. In the first scene, the protagonist is rescued from her house by the army after having slept through a cholera epidemic that killed everyone she knows:
"I fell asleep when everyone had the cholera and I have only just wakened up. Why does nobody come?"

"It is the child no one ever saw!" exclaimed the man, turning to his companions. "She has actually been forgotten!"

"Why was I forgotten?" Mary said, stamping her foot. "Why does nobody come?"

The young man whose name was Barney looked at her very sadly. Mary even thought she saw him wink his eyes as if to wink tears away.

"Poor little kid!" he said. "There is nobody left to come."
At this, Rio mumbled, "Everybody's dead, Dave. Dave, everybody's dead."
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2009-12-12 15:15
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Not Ordinarily Borrowable on Smashwords

Those of you who don't read me on Twitter may like to know that Not Ordinarily Borrowable is now available on smashwords.com, where you can pay US$1.99 (about £1.20) to read the whole thing in HTML or PDF right in your browser, or download it in a variety of ebook formats. Seems like a pretty good deal to me.

(And it's passed manual inspection there, which means that the book will be available on Barnes and Noble's ebooks site, in a few days.)

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2009-10-10 19:10
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A gentle introduction to Shavian

Some people have suggested I produce a Shavian edition of Borrowable. This is an interesting idea, because it would be easy to do, and all the Shavian addicts in the world would want a copy. It would also make rather an interesting book for kids (and adults) interested in codes and ciphers.

However, in order to do this, there would have to be an introduction to the alphabet aimed approximately at middle-grade readers. So I wrote one. I'd like to know what you think, and what you think should be changed.

There are still a lot of spaces where I'm going to put pictures, but all the text is there.
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2009-10-07 12:13

further midday updates

  • IT IS RIORDON'S BIRTHDAY.  Happy birthday to the kid who is officially the most awesome kid in the world.
  • The nicest Joule comment ever.
  • Two reviewers in Canada want physical copies of Borrowable: one says they will probably review it and one might review it. One other reviewer doesn't want it because it's self-published. I will therefore be ordering more author copies when my paycheque comes through.
  • The Launchpad people will allow Shavian translations only if we first fix the bugs in Launchpad which are holding it up. Arc does not seem to think this will be a major difficulty.
  • Cambridge University Library "would be delighted" to add Borrowable to their collections.
  • I have just received a (free) review copy of Writing Children's Books For Dummies.
  • I have finished A Tale of Two Guinea-Pigs and thoroughly enjoyed it. A review follows, later today.
  • Did I mention there was a quiz on the Borrowable site now? And the start of a recipe collection?